Although the verses were short, each one spoke louder and developed the relationship between Roxas and Axel in such a potent way that some multi-chapter fanfictions can’t even manage to do. o_O In other words: great job. I absolutely love this story. ^^;
Awww... that's so sad... ;_; Short but very well written...
Your analysis of how Axel and Roxas felt (or should I say "felt"? I wonder...) during their time in Organization XIII is well thought out & deep... I sensed the essence of emptiness present that Nobodies would reflect upon... (which is a + )
lol idk what else 2 say. Nice work. ^_^
Haha, I think number V was my favorite. Very nice story, thank you~